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Staring into the void
Memories wash over me
I breathe in
I breathe out
but I've lost control of me

Spacing out
all I see are vision through my eyes
Spacing out
everything starts to fade
how many times have I done this
dwelling on the emptiness
No fear, no doubt
just spacing out...
©2006-2010 ~Crystal9
:iconcrystal9:

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Just a poem about spacing out. It's funny how we can space out and get really deep with it to where it feels like a dream. Only we're awake when it happens.

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:iconlgthaoshi14:
that was quick. Not bad though. I'll give you kudos. Bravo! =)

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Simple words my dear,
it's all about simple, honest words...
:iconcrystal9:
Mmmm. I dunno. I wrote it a few years ago. I would like to add more to it though. I space out a lot when I have nothing to do. Hmmmm. Maybe I will add more to it one day. :nod:
:iconnynae:
Your comment rhymed.... O_o

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"A mermaid has no tears, and so she suffers even more." Hans Christian Andersen

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